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Page: 317- Selling pitch

Posted on 12th Oct 2014, 7:43 AM

317- Selling pitch
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12th Oct 2014, 7:43 AM

Dodom

I don't like this page a lot, plot wise, the current scene ends with Bryn hittong on Þrym, and she did that the previous page. Art wise, it has nothing out of the ordinary either. But without a few arguments, why Bryn, who isn't an idiot, would want to seduce a man she knows to be a bad husband makes little sense.
So I had her say it: she wants to join a clan where she believes her talents would be put to better use, and becoming one of the chief's wives is just the quickest way to get in.

And to follow yesterday's note on fighting techniques: today's axe swing is *not* a legit move, even if she had hit him with the blade and not the handle it wouldn't have done much damage, she was really just showing off her dexterity.

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12th Oct 2014, 7:58 AM

DizzasterJuice

The girl's got moves!

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12th Oct 2014, 8:34 AM

Dodom

If you got it flaunt it!

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13th Oct 2014, 9:55 AM

Skweeee

Nice job on sorting out the choreography of the 'tussle'. I suspect it's quite the thinking exercise to understand how two characters interact at such a close proximity.

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13th Oct 2014, 11:01 AM

Dodom

Sometimes, I make arm motions in the air to visualise how movements would play out. I hope nobody sees me.

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