Maybe Corbel keeps breaking the rules because he feels in competition with his father... but then, he doesn't know that himself!
Really love the grace of that first panel. I think that would look very cool on a tee shirt!!
Maybe I SHOULD start thinking about merchandise, but the fact that I never wear printed shirts myself makes it harder to design t-shirts, since no matter what I end up with a product I wouldn't wear! O:
Wait, did Corbel just say that Myces' mom doesn't want her to see what she looks like? That's harsh! =)
But he's right! And since she said it to Corbel's dad, he might have repeated it within his son's earshot.
Your line work is looking great. Thanks for sharing it. I agree with Draginbeard.
Perhaps a knit woolen sweater with a screenprinted linen. handsewed onto the back of the sweater -- or as an armband.
I'll have to give it serious thoughts some time!