When Leof ordered Hyht to hold Deore, he listened. It seems to amuse him, even though Deore is bigger than him.
Magen is VERY young at heart. Doing crappy work for someone who angered her sounds like a sensible reaction to her.
I like the dark color she picked for her clothes, and the smirk on his face when she offered to stab him in the other leg!
She's such a well bred lady, offering stabbings so kindly! Anyone would smile at her sight! XD
You're making me like these delightfully violent characters more and more! Also, the first four panels are a neat way to introduce her as well as frame the little brawl in the background. Great work!
I often find my own writing too wordy, so I try to work pages like this into scenes every now and then, to let the pictures breathe a little.
I BROUGHT YOU A STICK, YA JERK!
THAT'S A LOVELY STICK I'LL CHERISH IT JUST TO SPITE YOU!